Portrait C&C

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Ecas32, Dec 23, 2008.

  1. Ecas32

    Ecas32 TPF Noob!

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    i had taken this photo a few months ago and was just going through all my photos and wanted to know what yall thought about it.
    this was my first portrait with my rebel XSi. i shot this free handed and touched it up in post.

    1/60, F4.5, ISO 400
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  2. Ecas32

    Ecas32 TPF Noob!

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    bump... c'mon guys, i need some feedback
     
  3. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think patience is a virtue. :D

    35 mins go by and you don't get CC... chill.

    Comments: The background is very busy. I find myself looking at the globe more than the people. And they have a star right between their heads from the book in back.
    Rule of 3 might apply...ie they look too centered / there is too much empty space above their heads.
    They also seem a bit red, but this could be their general skin complexion.
    Nice expression on the lady's face

    From what I have seen in my short time here, the lack of CC on a picture means that it is middle of the road. Nothing truly horrible about it, and its nothing really extraordinary. I've had quite a few of mine go through with minimal comments as well.
     
  4. Ecas32

    Ecas32 TPF Noob!

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    ok thanks for the comment big twinky
    its just im really bored sitin at home on christmas break (Im only 14) with no one else here
     
  5. gob144

    gob144 TPF Noob!

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    yea he said it all clean up the background. also i think the focus is off.
     

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