Portrait - Comments Please

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  1. MommyOf4Boys

    MommyOf4Boys TPF Noob!

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    I did this of my son today and would like some input on these..same photo, 3 variations. Could I do something to make it better? Does it look good composition wise as it is? Which of the b/w do you like better?

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    The gaps in the fence are a bit distracting. I like the 2nd b/w.
     
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    I agree, I like the 2nd b/w better. What did you do differently on them?
     
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    i actually like the gaps in the fence as it makes the bg interesting.. makes me wonder what is behind it lol
     
  5. Big Mike

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    I like the third because of the vignette. The first two look like they could be cropped a little closer...especially on the top...but the vignette really helps.
    There does seem to be a lot of space around him...but I think it would look really good (the way it is) in a frame.

    Great shot b.t.w. :thumbsup:
     

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