Portrait ( My lil Brother )

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Maitha Mazrouei, Aug 26, 2007.

  1. Maitha Mazrouei

    Maitha Mazrouei TPF Noob!

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    I used Nikon D40
    Nikor 18-55mm
    Adobe photoshop

    Be Critical , But Kind !!

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    It's nice, but I would like to see his eyes. Also, in a white shirt he looks like a floating head. I would put him in a darker shirt. Nice conversion though.
     
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    wow I am just realizing how much I like your style. I think the image looks great even though you cant see the rest of his body.
     
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    I also like the style, especially the contrast and the detail. Did you consider using a fill-flash to eliminate the shadow under his nose?

    Also, a darker shirt, as was said, might have worked better.

    Overall - great picture! The scarf was a very classy touch.
     

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