Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by enezdez, Dec 8, 2017.
Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.
Finally you like something of mine lol - Thank you & have a great day!
A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.
Thank you both for your inputs!
Great shot and the book in the centre of the photo is my kinda read.
I feel the same way...to my way of thinking, there is a lot of the scene is shown as mostly a large mass of light-toned gray values in the center and left part of the iframe, and it looks to me as if the application of a bit more clarity, or contrast, might be able to add punch to the overall bookstore scene.
Here is a revised "Punched" version:
I think it looks a little better - what do guys think?
I think this version,with its added contrast, makes a stronger photo.
aaaahhhhh ... much nicer. But, (the big but), a touch of dodging on the guy and the books would really make the eye focus on the primary subject. I'd take a little off the top, the ceiling light is a distracting element.
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