Portrait of an Asian Girl

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#1 would be very nice if she were looking down instead of up, we'd see more of her brown eyes and less of the white, which looks a bit odd. IMO

#2 Is a good pic although for my own tastes I do not care for the style of taking them on an angle.

#3 I think could be a great pic if she were dressed a little nicer IMO.

The other thing I would like to add is they all need more color saturation, they appear washed out to me.
 
Beautiful. I love the first one :) I agree about the looking down would be better. But, I prefer seeing both. but that's just me. i try to do different versions of whatever I do for more variety.
 
I think the clothes do work in the last one, they give it a more urban feel which goes well with the setting. I might prefer to see the model looking towards the camera, especially on the first one.
I find the composition a little to cluttered on the second one.

Good job though :)
 
I like the composition in the first one, but I feel it gets a tad oversymbolic with her holding that leaf. No?
 
Well, I definitely don't like the way she looks in the first photo.

And I miss her feet in the last.
It's either just the upper part of the body, or a portrait, or the whole. I say. But who am I?
 

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