Beautiful. I love the first one I agree about the looking down would be better. But, I prefer seeing both. but that's just me. i try to do different versions of whatever I do for more variety.
I think the clothes do work in the last one, they give it a more urban feel which goes well with the setting. I might prefer to see the model looking towards the camera, especially on the first one.
I find the composition a little to cluttered on the second one.