portrait of john

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  1. briankern

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    The top part above the umbrella is really blown out. You may be able to PS it and tone it down a bit. I think it needs a lot of work in the contrast area, and composisiton as well. The umbrella pole being right in the center of the face takes away from the person a lot. Has an interesting feel to it, but I think it needs some work. Play around with it in PS or some kind of program and see what you come up with :wink:
     
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    ditto , would be really cool when the top of the umrella would be visible, i mean the edge of it. while the smog is great
     
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    i made a print of it with the whole umbrella showing and it just didnt do it for me. but yea, contrast needs some work
     

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