Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by briankern, Dec 19, 2004.
The top part above the umbrella is really blown out. You may be able to PS it and tone it down a bit. I think it needs a lot of work in the contrast area, and composisiton as well. The umbrella pole being right in the center of the face takes away from the person a lot. Has an interesting feel to it, but I think it needs some work. Play around with it in PS or some kind of program and see what you come up with
ditto , would be really cool when the top of the umrella would be visible, i mean the edge of it. while the smog is great
i made a print of it with the whole umbrella showing and it just didnt do it for me. but yea, contrast needs some work
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