portrait of john

[briankern]

 

[Nikon Fan]

The top part above the umbrella is really blown out. You may be able to PS it and tone it down a bit. I think it needs a lot of work in the contrast area, and composisiton as well. The umbrella pole being right in the center of the face takes away from the person a lot. Has an interesting feel to it, but I think it needs some work. Play around with it in PS or some kind of program and see what you come up with

 

[mentos_007]

ditto , would be really cool when the top of the umrella would be visible, i mean the edge of it. while the smog is great

 

[briankern]

i made a print of it with the whole umbrella showing and it just didnt do it for me. but yea, contrast needs some work