Portrait of Kara (C&C please)

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by lmchelaru, Mar 4, 2010.

  1. lmchelaru

    lmchelaru TPF Noob!

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    First time in a studio. What do you think?
     
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    Hi there-

    Pretty model. The wrinkled fabric is a bit distracting to me and overall I don't think it does much for the photo. Maybe crop in- fill the frame more with her face for more impact?
     
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    Maybe I'm just old and can't seee that well anymore but she just looks out of focus -- and that's distracting. And the highlights on her forehead looks clipped and overblown.
     

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