Portrait of Lisa, easter 2006 (yup, a while ago).

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  1. Foffen

    Foffen TPF Noob!

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    This is, as the title already told you, this is a portrait of my very own Lisa from easter last year.. This one is taken a few hundred metres above my parents cottage, on a beautiful mountain in Northern Norway.. C&C are highly appreciated.

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  2. The_Traveler

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    Nicely exposed, beautiful subject but, IMO, a portrait crop would have been better and the major problem, also IMO, is the lack of connection of subject with anything, camera, person.
     
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    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    you are looking for a comment regarding Lisa (beautiful, by the way), or regarding the photography? ;)

    Hard to separate the two in this case ;)

    Nice colours, good use of fill flash.

    I agree with the_traveler, that the crop is not ideal, maybe portrait might serve the scene better.
    I further agree, that the subject is not connected with the scene in terms of composition. But to me this does not really pose a problem, since she is connected by the way she is dressed. One can feel that she is really there.
     

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