Portrait Session From Today

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  1. The Phototron

    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    Finally got someone else to model! Someone willing to cooperate, too. I fail at posing once again, but she did all the posing by herself!

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    Bonus: :D
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    Comments and critiques are welcome! :)
     
  2. jstuedle

    jstuedle No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    The flair in 3 was avoidable. Otherwise I like all but the B&W. It looks like she really tried to work with you.
     
  3. The Phototron

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    Thanks for taking time to comment. The flare was on purpose, but the general attitude seems to hate it.

    You mean the B&W shot look forced? I thought it look a bit timid and quite natural. Maybe I'm missing something?

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    Sw1tchFX TPF Noob!

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    LOVE the backlight!

    Spot out some of the dust in the air and you're golden!
     
  5. The Phototron

    The Phototron TPF Noob!

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    Thank you!

    I'm not sure how the backlight is causing the dust. Care to explain?

    I'll try to fix it tomorrow, my macbook is slow as hell when running photoshop!
     
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    Two more and shameless bump:

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    The dust again!

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    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    with the right expression, number six could have been very sexy.

    my favorite would have to be the bonus. there is something very playful about it that really grabs at me.
     
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    I actually dodge her chest area, so people don't get distracted. So no, it's not intended as a sexy pose! lol.
     
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    I really like 2, 3, and bonus, 6 also. Good model, fanciful and free, made me smile. ron
     
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    Thanks, she's very fun to shoot with.
     
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    excellent lighting!!!! 2 is prolly my fav. nice color saturation on it. you def have the technique down for lighting placement.
     
  12. The Phototron

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    Thanks! My favorite is number 2 as well. I can't agree with you on my skill. I have a lot more to learn and improve on.
     

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