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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by spike5003, Jun 26, 2005.

  1. spike5003

    spike5003 TPF Noob!

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    Taken in a studio with a pentax zx-60

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  2. skiboarder72

    skiboarder72 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    wow, very cool feeling, love the black and white
     
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    I like it as it is, but 2 things pop into my mind while looking at it.

    1) I would like to see it with a bit more contrast. Right now it looks just a little too grey for my liking. Just a bit, not much.

    2) I can't say for sure, but maybe you could try cropping more of the left side off? As it is his elbow is already partially hidden. IMO, taking a bit more off would get rid of the feeling that we're missing something. This would also work because he's looking to the right, so he would be looking towards the extra space.
     

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