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  1. blinded

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    Great pose, and while I'm not usually a fan of any kind of elaborate framing work, this works pretty well. Couple of things I do notice though, and this may partly be due to my monitor--it's new and needs dialed in properly: There's a blown out area all along the camera-right cheek and neck. Also, the line in the background is a bit distracting, as it rises right from his head.
     
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    shark has put it quite well as always.... I agree totally.
     
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    It reminds me of the 50-cent foto booths at a penny arcade. That's the look you were shooting for, right?
     
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    Great effort. :) But it's so contrasty that yes, it's a bit blown on the subject's face. But cool idea, definitely worth another try!
     
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    'E looks like a Brit-ish rockuh. ;)
     
  7. blinded

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    It's sid vicious, can't you tell? :lol:


    I just dinked around with contrast too much. My moniter is a bit dark and about to die so it looked good on my screen.
     

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