Portraits - C&C (feedback) please

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by AllHailZ, Feb 17, 2008.

  1. AllHailZ

    AllHailZ TPF Noob!

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    Long time no see.

    I finally enrolled in Photography 2, and I'd like feedback from you guys on the pics I've taken for the class so far. I developed these 35mm film pictures myself in the darkroom. The university just got new Nikon Coolscan 9000 ED, and I scanned the negatives directly. Quality came out pretty good, I think.

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    Let me know if it's too many... I don't know if the rules have changed about the number or not since Spring 2007 when I last posted here.

    Thanks!
     
  2. lifeafter2am

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    I really like the first shot! Definitely my favorite of the group!
     
  3. AllHailZ

    AllHailZ TPF Noob!

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    Thanks, lifeafter2am!

    I forgot, if anybody could work on this one, I'd appreciate it a lot. I don't like the sunspot...

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  4. nealjpage

    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    15 and 16 do it best for me. Nice series there, Hailz.
     
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    AllHailZ TPF Noob!

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    Thanks, nealj.

    Nobody else has any critique/comments/feedback?
     
  6. bhop

    bhop No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It's hard for me to comment individually when I see so many.. it's probably a personal issue.. heh.. but as a set, I really like the mood you have going here. As a set, I don't think the horse image fits, but on its own, it's a nice photo. I really like #13.. it's creepy..

    A little off topic I you don't mind me asking, what part of NC are you in? I was born and raised in Burlington myself.. heh..
     
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    #'s 1,3,7,11 & 13 are my favorites. I like the mood in these shots.
     
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    i like 10 and 14...too bad she didn't smile more
     
  9. AllHailZ

    AllHailZ TPF Noob!

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    I see your point, bhop. I'll keep that in mind from now on and post less.

    I'm from Durham, but right now I'm at college in Greensboro.

    And Mesoam, she did -

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    hahaha... :oops:

    damn I love feeling dumb!
     
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    I like the sunspot, it adds a dramatic element to it.
     
  12. AllHailZ

    AllHailZ TPF Noob!

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    lol, that's not me, that was my photography partner from class.

    I'm a guy. ;)

    Sun Devil, I was thinking that the brightness of the window was already dramatic enough, that's why I wanted to get rid of the sunspot.
     

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