portraits..(mumbles).

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  1. Pleasetakeitkind

    Pleasetakeitkind TPF Noob!

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    I'm still very new to shooting outside of a studio, any thoughts or suggestions would be great.

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  2. Corry

    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    The second one doesn't really grab my attention, but that first one? Here's my suggestion: How 'bout YOU give ME tips on shooting?

    Lovin the first one...it's simple, but very well done. His eyes really grab you!
     
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    Senor Hound TPF Noob!

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    Good stuff. In the second one you look like Adrian Grenier from Entourage (Vinny!)
     
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    First one is great, good light, good contrast between the hair and the skin.

    The second one is a bit dull, there doesn't seem to be any real context of why he's there, the pose is a little flat and you've cropped him at the knee on the back leg which makes it look a little more awkward.
     

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