Portraits

[Alice]

I'm really nervous to show you all these, because you're all so much more knowledgeable and talented than me! But, I suppose I can run away to sea if you all completely hate them!

These are some portraits of my friend Rhiannon, I didn't use any reflectors or any of that jazz, just waited and took them when I was ready. On the first one, I know there are drainpipes there that ruin it! It narks me every time but it was unavoidable in my opinion because of where I wanted it all... they were just practices and experiments really.... eek!

Oh, and they're scanned terribly so the quality is not brilliant... I should just get out really!

Well, here they are anyway!

So any thoughts?

 

[bethany138]

I think they are nice for a beginning. Both could use a little bit of contrast boost. If you will email the full sized file (1st one) i will edit out the pipes.

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[Alice]

Oh, thank you, I'll do that.