Portraiture

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Arhy, May 6, 2009.

  1. Arhy

    Arhy TPF Noob!

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    Hello everyone,
    here're some shots from my very last photoshooting.
    Hope you'll like them.
    Feel free to leave comments.
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  2. NateS

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    Wow...I really love number 1 and 3 is great too.

    2 is good, but I don't like how she blends in with the background. I think it would be a little better if you played with the "color/hue" slider on the B&W conversion to try and get a little more seperation between model and fence.
     
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    1) I like it.

    2) I agree that the jacket blends in too much. Also, I think it's a little too closely cropped (especially with the finger tip being cut off).

    3) I like the composition except for her left arm being cut off.

    Lighting and exposure on these are great though!!
     
  4. teneighty23

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    Wow your model has such a classic look to her, #3 is my favorite, very complimentry soft white-ish colours in it.
     
  5. Arhy

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    Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments.
    I totally agree about the second one. Going to try something else with it.
     
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    Wow she is so beauty! Great pictures.
     
  7. woojiebear

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    great shots!
    love the first one :)
     

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