Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by santino, Nov 17, 2005.
what do you guys think?
taken in Wroclaw, Poland - entry to underground
any critique appreciated.
Oh, I wish it were larger!! It's killing me. I'm struck by the shadows and the direction of her head....:thumbup: just want to see some more detail.
Repost, larger? Yes?
here you are, hope it isn't too large. if it would be, tell me
Not too large for me. Gosh, but I love that pose, and those shadows! My main problem, now that I can see her more clearly, is that she appears a bit overexposed. The highlights appear blown on the cup and socks, and the image is a tad soft.
What did you use to shoot this one with, Santino?
I think you're right (the overexposure bothered me a bit too) :bounce:
do you think the image is worth a bit burning in PS?
as for the equipment I can't really remember :er: it was Fuji X-Tra film (ISO 400) if it was a rangefinder than it was my Zorki and if SLR than my Praktica.
Excellent! I would say that you did that you did good job exposure wise. Critically I am having a hard time with the handrail running through her head.
It might be worth a play in PS. If it's blown in those spots, though, I'm not sure if there's anything you can do. You can't put detail in where there isn't any. But I think it has potential to be a strong image, and worth a little bit of time just to see what happens. After all, the worst thing that can happen is that it will end up in the "if only" stack.
Oh, and I see what Craig is saying about the rail - but I like the strong diagonal line so much, it's not bothering me here.
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