practice practice practice... CC please :)

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  1. momofthing1and2

    momofthing1and2 TPF Noob!

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    Exposure Time1/60 secF-NumberF 4.8ISO Speed Ratings500Focal Length105.0 mm

    What I see right off the bat is that the wind was blowing and the bow on her dress was pretty much right in the way... ?? what else?
     
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    kind of out of focus and the cropping is weird, cutting off the head and its too close for me
     
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    it's oof.
     
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    The shutter speed is too slow for the focal lenght you are using, as a rule shutter speed should match focal length and then factor in 1.5x for sensor size eg. 105mm should be 1/160 minimum unless you have a VR lens
     
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    Very cute kid. I think that the focus fell on his forehead/hair. What was your setting?
     
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    Its seems a little OOF as mentioned before. I agree with the crop comment, as well. If you were zoomed out a little more it would give the picture a lot more character and allow the viewer to focus on the face as a whole, rather than aspects of the face.

    Cute kid!
     
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    Thanks so much! I do have the VR lens.. I will be practicing some more for sure!
     
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    Its still better to use a faster shutter speed
     

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