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Discussion in 'General Critical Analysis' started by T_J, Oct 29, 2007.

  1. T_J

    T_J TPF Noob!

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    I have been working on this one for a while and feel it is done.

    I look forward to your c&c.

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    Yeah, its done. H
     
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    Insightful Flash, thanks.
     
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    I know what you're going for, but the blurred ball is completely distracting.
     
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    The blurred ball is bad and it needs more D.O.F it lacks one specific subject and i finde my eyes wondering.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback Max and a5.
     
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    ne time
     
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    I like the idea, but I think I'd try it in the reverse. Maybe try having having the balls all bokehed out, and have the moving ball stock still.
    Or better yet, keep it all in focus, with just a smidge of motion on the moving ball.
     
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    i like it.. except the one ball that's out of focus, i find it terribly distracting.. it looks more like a smudge on your lens than a tennis ball.. other than that nitpick i do like it!
     

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