Pretty Me

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by elking, Dec 7, 2009.

  1. elking

    elking TPF Noob!

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    Alright, it's not me actually. I lied. :)

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    Comments and critiques?
     
  2. IgsEMT

    IgsEMT No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    LIAR!!!!!!
    Cute girl ;)
    The wall on the camera-right is a bit distracting. The image is soft. See if you can boost the sharpness a bit on the eyes and maybe jewelry. In portraits, unless you're going for specific effect, eyes should be the focus (sharpest) point. IF you can't sharpen it then try blurring everything except the eyes; its a different way of doing things, but it works if done right.
    Good Luck
     
  3. elking

    elking TPF Noob!

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    Thank you so much for the advice. I'll try and see what if I can have a better outcome :)
     
  4. wescobts

    wescobts TPF Noob!

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    As above a tad sharper, but I really like the hair light, and the relaxed expression, great capture.
     
  5. SrBiscuit

    SrBiscuit TPF Noob!

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    agreed with softness...
    seems a bit flat too.
    play with levels and/or contrast
     
  6. kamalzharif

    kamalzharif TPF Noob!

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    yes, the wall is a bit distracting, try another balancing subject for this composition
     

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