Pretty Senior in B&W

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by DeepSpring, Jun 16, 2007.

  1. DeepSpring

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  2. DeepSpring

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    I find the background of this image really distracting. The really bright white behind her head/shoulders cut through her head and disrupts a little bit. The exposure on her face is really god, but the clothes seem a little overexposed. Also, her expression, while good, looks a little fake/forced.
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I would prefer if the dark/light line in the background didn't intersect her head...but other than that...it's a great photo of a pretty girl. Not much else to say.
     
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    I like the photograph, like others mentioned, the background is pretty interesting and contrasty even though you blurr it out. lol. It's a good photograph but just watch the background next time around.
     

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