pride and joy

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  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    this guy was covering "pride and joy" by Stevie Ray Vaughan

    and when he was singing the words "pride and joy" he would look at his daughter and his eyes would get really large and i loved it.

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    i dodged and burned the eyes slightly. other than that it hasnt been touched.

    c/c please!
     
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    i like it with the story.
    It is kinda a goofy expression.
    the whole pic seems a little bit flat/grey.
    i think it might benefit from some contrast?
    nice dof
    :)
     
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    It's a good capture, but I'd adjust the tones if possible. It looks hazy and flat as it is.
     
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    thanks for the feedback!
     

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