Prison steps, wall, church and flower

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  1. Royal

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    CC is welcome. Enjoy

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    #3 and #4: There's a some intruding on your picture on the right.. The shadows are not working with your flowers.
     
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    3 looks a little soft IMO. I don't like how it cuts off at the top too. I like number 4, but 1 and 2 aren't doing it for me, sorry.
     
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    No problem. I'm glad to know what I need to improve. These were done with a canon ae 1 film camera and put on a cd when developed. The edge of the light post in the church pic was not in the shot on the developed film, only on the cd. Strange.
     
  5. 1 Pic > 1,000 Words

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    I think these are some interesting shots, but the overall quality of the pictures could have been better (not to take anything away from you). I think they are too zoomed in and not quite focused enough, if that makes sense. I'm still pretty new to photography, so it's hard for me to give more constructive critiques, but I try :) Definitely some interesting subjects though.
     

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