production still

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  1. metroshane

    metroshane TPF Noob!

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    I've been doing a lot of critiquing in the last couple of days...so in fairness, I'll offer something up. I haven't done much photog lately on the account of the film I'm shooting...but this is a production still I shot after we set up and lit a shot. Fire away....

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    That blob in the middle is distracting. What is it?
     
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    blob? the umbrella?
     
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    OH! Duh.. now I see what the background is. I still think that umbrella is distracting. However, I like the tone you have for it with the dark light yet everything you want is highlighted.
     

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