production still

[metroshane]

I've been doing a lot of critiquing in the last couple of days...so in fairness, I'll offer something up. I haven't done much photog lately on the account of the film I'm shooting...but this is a production still I shot after we set up and lit a shot. Fire away....

 

[karissa]

That blob in the middle is distracting. What is it?

 

[metroshane]

blob? the umbrella?

 

[karissa]

OH! Duh.. now I see what the background is. I still think that umbrella is distracting. However, I like the tone you have for it with the dark light yet everything you want is highlighted.