Profile Shoot

Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by ParkerWallace, Jan 27, 2008.

  1. ParkerWallace

    ParkerWallace TPF Noob!

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    Hi, I'm new here and all opinions are welcome. I just started with photography. I did one photoshoot with a friend who wants to have a profile shot for her portfolios.

    What can you say about my shot?

    Edited: so I don't know how to attach pictures. LOL

    Here's the link of my shot: http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5499/reddressas8.jpg
     
  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Hi Parker, welcome to ThePhotoForum.
    Hmmm :scratch: ... I can say only very little about your "shot" ... for there is nothing there to look at.

    Search yourself a free photo host (www.photobucket.com or www.fastpictures.com or any of the others out there), load your photo up into your new account, and link it to here via the [​IMG]
     
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    Thanks LaFoto. I edited my post and uploaded my shot at Imageshack. Would love to hear the opinions of experts out there.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    OK, this given, I best move your thread into ... where shall it go? People and Pets? Professional Portraits and Weddings? ... Hmmm :scratch: - you want the EXPERTS? OK, let the experts on portrait photography see this.
     
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    The shot, by itself looks pretty nice. I'm curious though as to what your friend wants the shot for. What kind of portfolio? Is she a model? Actor? Artist? Musician?
     
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    Thanks for the comment. She's a model so she wants professional shots for her portfolios. Well, I'm hardly a professional but this is free practice so I took the chance to take her photos.

    This is another photoshoot we did for her portfolio: http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6583/bathingsuoten5.jpg
     
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    I can't seem to get the second link to work.
     
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    I love these!
     
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    What's your retouching workflow?

    In the first shot, I think the forehead could use a little work. And though I think the lighting overall is pretty good, the right hand side of her face is a bit too dark...makes the eyes look off. I can't get the second shot to load.

    Nice work though.
     
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    nice lighting!
     
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    Good work! I would like to see more of it.

    Love & BASS
     
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    I love the second one - very good!
     

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