Promo ads - rip 'em apart

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  1. DeepSpring

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    Here are two ads I made.Anything to make them look better any critique on them I'd like to hear it all thank you.

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    What are these going to be for?
    Cards? Print ads?
     
  3. DeepSpring

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    8.5x11 to hang around on bulletin boards
     
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    Hey now? Won't they load for me? I get downright NOTHING, not even the red x, now what is THIS!?!?!

    Oh, post just finished, now I'm editing to say that ... the red x's are there... but no pics. Hmph...
     
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    The layout looks good but the pictures are too small to really make any comment.
     
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    bump
     
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    the pictures are too small to really make any comment.
     
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    I dont need comments about the specific pictures but the font the layout how everything looks together
     
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    The layout works fine.

    I disagree. Stronger pictures will make a better ad, layout notwithstanding.
     
  11. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I’m fine with both layouts and the photos in #1, but with #2 the 3 photos in the top roll have such different contrast and saturation levels they seem to conflict with each other (IMO). I sure the photos work on there own.
     
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    I hate to pile on, but if you look at the #1, the white suit on the guy in the picture in the lower left is the brightest thing on the page. In the diagonal corner the guy's elbow is brighter than anything else.


    Secondly, IMO, not having a telephone number and not having a real domain account is really offputting. Domains are cheap to register and there are low-cost cell phone accounts. If this is a business, you have to have the basics of a business - to be accessible to your clients and make them comfortable that you are accessible.
     

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