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  1. Purified

    Purified TPF Noob!

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    I'm wondering how the picture comes across... I was trying to do a theme that matched my username, purified. If there is anything I could do to improve please make some suggestions... this is my 3rd day of experience with a good camera.

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  2. JonMikal

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    nice capture! pearl necklace really adds to the shot.
     
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    An awsome shot... i really like it. i think it looks a tad on the green side. maybey shift it towards blue a bit. but i dont know, a great shot!
     
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    Ditto
     
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    wow that is indeed an awesome picture.
     
  6. angelikmermaid

    angelikmermaid TPF Noob!

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    tho i must say it looks like she is wearing a earring and i think it would look even better if we could see all of the earring. it would add a little more..

    still a great pic tho ;)
     
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    To counter the green, shift it toward magenta. Blue counters yellow.
    Unless you're looking for an overall blueish-green hue, then go ahead and shift toward blue. But for me, when i think "Purified" i think clean whites and crips blues - green... not so much.
     
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    The hair covering the eyes, the uplifted head, the frozen droplets all work great. I would also like to see a slight color adjustment to neutralize that as a consideration in the photo - what I see is a definite cyan cast that can be slightly cooled off by adding a bit of red. Then, if there is any green left, add some magenta to "clean" the color cast a bit. Also, I would consider burning in the cheek area a little.

    Nice shot.

    Tuna
     
  9. mcblum

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    I like the green tone. I'd say keep it. The shot struck me as a picture I immediately liked and didn't want changed. Nice work.
     
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    Superb. (that's all I can say mate)
     
  11. mentos_007

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    this is amazing! I love it!
     
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    Wow, I really wish I had your eye! I agree about the pearl necklace. Perfect.
     

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