Pyramid Hill

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  1. luftwagon

    luftwagon TPF Noob!

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    Pyramid Hill Sculpture Park
    Hamilton, Ohio

    took a lot of photos ... didn't care for most ... here are a couple ... please c&c ...

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    Like the first one...with the background I would like to see it in color.
     
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    Some nice work. In the future, it would be appeciated if you could number your images for easier reference.

    C&C per req:

    1. A nice image, well executed B&W conversion, nowever given the similarity of tones, I think this would be much better in colour.

    2. This image doesn't really work for me. The main subject [I assume] is shoved against the LH edge and suffers from over-bright highlights on the upper surfaces. Additionally, be careful of things which "grow" from your subjects, in this case the fountain behind "his" left shoulder.

    3. Again, one which doesn't seem especially suited to B&W IMO. The sky is very washed out, and the reflections on the left side of the pyrmaid seem out of place.

    4. As per #3.

    5. Again, not an ideal B&W image. This one is very mid-tone rich, and to be honest, seems rather 'blah' to me.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

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    Thanks for the comments.
    This was shot with Kodak 400 B&W film ... so they're not conversions.
     

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