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  1. tkmart

    tkmart TPF Noob!

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    Hello,
    I am taking photography seriously but I am still in the beginning, so I would really appreciate all the C&C that I can get…..

    I have taken this from my last visit to Malaysia, it is a crop from the original.
    Thank you.

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  2. bluewave930

    bluewave930 TPF Noob!

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    nice photo~however I think it will be better if there is a person there
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    This is a nicely composed shot with the tree, chairs and eyeline taking the viewers' eyes right out into the distance.
    I think that the tree and chairs in the distance balance of the trees and chairs in the left front. Very nice all over.

    I would lighten up the tree and chairs a little to bring out some detail and not allow it to merge into a dark, shapeless blob.
     
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    Peniole TPF Noob!

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    I wouldn't mind relaxing there. Nice shot.
     
  5. tkmart

    tkmart TPF Noob!

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    Oh thanks a lot, I really appreciate your response, a person would add to the photo but for some reason I am a bit not sure when it comes to take pictures of people on the beach, but you are absolutely right, it's just me !
    I will keep it in my mind for the future.



    Thank you, what you said helps a lot, I will keep it in my mind for the next photos. That’s an excellent point that I have missed. I really appreciate it.




    [FONT=&quot]I cant blame you .:D thank you a lot.[/FONT]
     
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    Really great shot, I like it.
     
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