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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by amar fit for battle., Jun 19, 2008.

  1. amar fit for battle.

    amar fit for battle. TPF Noob!

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    reignmkr TPF Noob!

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    #2 seems to tell a story although I seem to put a finger on it.

    Great series.
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Quite like 1 & 2. Good style.
     
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    Rogan TPF Noob!

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    i like the ideas but i cnt really see them!


    make em a little bigger ;)

    im likin #3 lots
     
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    nynfortoo TPF Noob!

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    I like 1 and 2, though 1 could do with a slight straightening out, unless my eyes are tricking me! It's quite interesting how you've broken the convergence with the girl climbing.

    I like the light and silhouette in no. 2 and it does seem to tell a bit more of a story than the others. The star-shaped burst of light is very nice.

    No. 3 looks like a model to me. The scale just seems a bit off; it makes the girl look tiny. It's quite strange, and I can't quite put my finger on it, but it's quite off-putting for me.

    Great job, all the same :)
     
  6. amar fit for battle.

    amar fit for battle. TPF Noob!

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    thank you! and yeah the first one is a little crooked, but I kind of like it like that =/
     
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    2 and 3 are my faves. good work.
     

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