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Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by JSB, May 3, 2010.

  1. JSB

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    I'm really pleased with these...

    C&C certainly welcome.

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    More to follow..
     
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    I don't have much to offer for C&C, but I really like these. Good work!
     
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    Her right eye is smaller or closed a little more than her left eye.
     
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    Hmmm...
     
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    The third one is very nice... nearly perfect.

    I want to move her a TINY bit further around the tree to get a wee bit more light striking her right cheek. And maybe a slightly higher camera position. The only other nit-pick is the bit of light on the front of her blouse we see just below her arm. Cropping can take care of that.

    Very nice! I'd be pleased too.

    -Pete
     
  6. JSB

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    Good eyes lol

    Thank you very much for the comments :)
     
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    3rd one is great. #1 seems odd because the skin tone of her face doesnt match the rest of her.
     
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    The first two seem awkward, but the last one is surper nice. I'd patch out the highlight just above her right smile line and call it good.
     
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    The first one looks too much like a mugshot to me.

    I like the second, but it shows the shadow on her nose more. Nice crop.

    I think the third is the best, overlooking the highlights.

    Builds character!

    She is very pretty none the less.
     
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    Thank you very much for the comments!

    Thats why I like posting here, honesty and great eye for detail.
     
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    why did you have to say that, now when i look at it that's all i see :)

    whilst i agree that the first does look a bit like a mugshott, well if that was the mug shot, it's a very nice mug shot. but i see hwat you mean

    #3 does look the best and as Christie Photo said, if you could have turn her head just that little further..... perfect.

    well done.
     
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    #1 the eyes seem over done, but that's just a matter of opinion.

    #2 is my favorite, eye catching. and beautiful
     

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