Railroad

[CW Jones]

Took the set of pictures a little while ago and was bored today so I played around with them and did some editing. Let me know what you think!

C&C always welcome!

 

[Goontz]

I like the rust tones that you brought out. Did you have the camera sitting on the rock? The amount of OOF rock in the bottom left is a little distracting to me.

 

[CW Jones]

Ummm I believe I put in on the mini tripod I got at best buy for like $5 haha I didn't have my 30D when I took this so it was the SX110is on that tripod I believe.

I see what your saying about that corner... at first I liked it but now I am not sure, thats one of the reasons I wanted some comments and criticisms on it.

Thanks!

 

[Chris.]

Doesn't do much for me.

 

[CW Jones]

lol care to elaborate?

 

[o hey tyler]

It seems like there's too much tone mapping and not enough differentiation between colors. Everything just looks kind of rusty.

 

[Gaerek]

I like the colors of this shot a lot, but the OOF object in the foreground is pretty distracting to me. Also, I think a higher point of view would really bring out the tracks a lot more. I'm not sure if I'd go as high as eye level, but definitely would look nice a couple more feet off the ground.

 

[CW Jones]

cool I have lots of things to try next time I am in the area then! haha thanks