Rainy night, long exposures.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Private Joker, Oct 5, 2010.

  1. Private Joker
    Offline

    Private Joker New Member

    Joined:
    Jun 3, 2010
    Messages:
    46
    Likes Received:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    Reno, NV
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +1 / 0
    Hey everyone! The weather is starting to change where I am, and I finally got around to shooting some long exposures I've had in mind for quite some time. It doesn't rain here all that often, so I had to jump on the opportunity. Let me know what you think!

    Thanks,
    Cody

    [​IMG]
    Beginning To See The Light. | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

    [​IMG]
    Double Exposure. | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

    [​IMG]
    Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing!

    [​IMG]
    Untitled | Flickr - Photo Sharing!
  2. Mesoam
    Offline

    Mesoam New Member

    Joined:
    Sep 10, 2007
    Messages:
    1,120
    Likes Received:
    4
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    CT
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +4 / 0
    i dig the second one, would probably work well in B/W as well
  3. bigtwinky
    Offline

    bigtwinky New Member

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2008
    Messages:
    4,805
    Likes Received:
    271
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    Montreal
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +271 / 0
    Seems a bit all over the place. They also seem like more night abstract shots, with no clear subject. Which is totally fine if thats what you are going for. Dont forget that even thought they are somewhat abstract, they still need to have focus and interest for the viewer in terms of composition and subject matter

    1- Not liking this one. I like the bottom half, just not the top half. The light reflections in the water along with the texture of the pavement is nice, but the attempt at streaks going in differnet direction add some chaos to the image and my eye doesnt know where to go.

    2- Pretty cool, but personally, I'd crop out the top row of lights. Really digging the faded crosswalk

    3- Interesting, but missing something. I'm thinking its missing showing me what is making those coloured lights

    4- I think you pulled off the zoom pan pretty nice. I would like the same thing but with a better scene. Pretty cool though
  4. Private Joker
    Offline

    Private Joker New Member

    Joined:
    Jun 3, 2010
    Messages:
    46
    Likes Received:
    1
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    Reno, NV
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +1 / 0
    Thank you for the comments, bigtwinky. I understand what you're saying about a focus, but these are abstract, and my subject was essentially light itself. I have to disagree if you're suggesting my composition is weak, but we are on the same page in terms of the first photo. My eye doesn't know where to go either, I should have paid attention to that!
  5. Jay Hsiang Studio
    Offline

    Jay Hsiang Studio New Member

    Joined:
    Oct 7, 2010
    Messages:
    9
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    Temple City
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +0 / 0
  6. Derrel
    Online

    Derrel Mr. Rain Cloud

    Joined:
    Jul 23, 2009
    Messages:
    28,515
    Likes Received:
    9,816
    Trophy Points:
    113
    Location:
    USA
    Gallery:
    Ratings:
    +9,870 / 1
    Yessss...the second one is fun! And the third one too...nice use of broad areas of texture and color. These show some nice concepts. I think the third shot would look better if that dark clump or whatever were carefully cloned out. I like the way the highlights are colored in the out of focus wall in the bottom section of the third photo. I'm not too keen on the burned-out highlight in the upper right corner, but I do like those highlights on that wet pavement. Good shootin'.

Share This Page