Random (noob) shots ^^

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  1. wah_delayed

    wah_delayed TPF Noob!

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    I really have no idea what I'm doing, I just got my cam a week and a half ago, and these are my some of the shots I've done so far... I feel like something's wrong... :lol: help :mrgreen:

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    yep... something is definitely wrong. No pictures are showing up.
     
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    #1 out of focus and don't have a clue what i'm looking at
    #2 out of focus same as above
    #3 i know what it is but way out of focus
    I would delete all those shots and find something interesting to shoot
     
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    Im a noob as well, but I would say, ditch the flash and mess with the shutter speed and fstop to get some shots without the white of the flash.

    Focus is definitely off as well. Maybe try zooming out a bit too, I can see what number 1 is, and 3, number 2 is still a mystery :lol:
     
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    Why would these be posted on here? They're all out of focus and it doesnt realy look like much thought was put into it at all....
     
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    I think #2 has the potential to be a very interesting shot.

    My thoughts:
    1) The focus needs to be on the water stream.
    2) I'd try to use a smaller aperture to keep some of the background detail.
    3) Remove the bottle and don't shoot at an angle. Make sure the countertop line is level in the frame. I like the combination of colors in the background and I think you have the proportions correct.
    4) I like the harshness of the pop-up flash in this shot.
    5) Clean off all of the water spots.
    6) Additionally, I would take a few shots with a dry background and then wipe all of the stone surfaces with mineral oil.

    Keep taking pictures and have fun! Thanks for sharing.

    benjamin
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I think you should make your own thread. Like you were asked to in another thread you hijacked.
     

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