Random Portrait - Critique?

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  1. ks0385

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    Let me know what you think.

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    it has its art. May not please everyone's eyes but I like it. Is it self portrait or someone else?
     
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    It's my girlfriend.
     
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    i think the lightning is really good. she is beautifull.
     
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    :thumbup: Good work on her. It's good to use ur wife and GF for practice. When I said it may not please everyone's eyes, I didn't mean her look, she looks good, I meant the style, you know? But yeah, as said above, I like it and the other person said, good lighting.

    BTW, did you use external lights?
     
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    Thanks for the comments.

    Lighting was whatever was there. We were sitting in a Thai restaurant by a window at like two pm.

    Does the black thing behind her make it worse?
     
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    It may bother some people but it doesn't bother me at all. I think it'd look too plain w/out it, being the wall white and all. You can remove it and post both and see what people say?
     
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    Are those Patapon tattoos?
     
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    Why yes they are...
     
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    random thought for a random picture...

    There's nothing so tragic as seeing a family pulled apart by something as simple as a pack of wolves.
     
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    But being pulled apart by a pack of wolves in itself is quite a simple event.
     
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