Random Shots: C&C PLEASE!

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  1. D-B-J

    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    All but the campus ones are/were in raw, and wow.. I LOVE RAW!

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    I like photo 4. The colors/lighting, composition, bokeh. Beautiful.
     
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    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Thanks! I played around with this image alot. I wasnt sure about the composition, but you reassured me!
     
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    If the color temperature is adjusted warmer than it was in reality, allow me to reassure you that looks good to me also ;). If not, it was a magic hour!
     
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    Try the ones of the buildings later in the day like just before sunset. This is the "golden hour." So is the hour after sunrise. This will give more of a warm, soft tone to it. Plus more clouds may help as well. Just my opinions, but I hope I could help in some way ;)
     
  6. D-B-J

    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    thanks all! I did play with the temperature a little, especially on number 4.
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Yes, the wisteria in 4 is really, really nice. But I also like 6 and the green background!
    Our wisteria still hasn't arrived at this stage of flowering yet. But I see buds.
     
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    cnutco No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I have to say that I love the landscape shot! (#2)
     
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    1.)The sun glare and the slightly crooked angel kind of bugs me...maybe straightened out or Hdr'd?

    2.)Absolutely love the colors and composition!! Although. *I* personally would crop a smidge of the foreground...But thats just me. Its a great shot as is. :)

    3,4,5,6) I dont entirely care for them myself. Wish some parts of them were a little bit more in focus.other stray parts/twigs distracting, and some are a little dark. But I Do love the bokeh.. and the flowers you chose, nice DOF.
     
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    thanks! The landscape shot is of my highschool. It is a beautiful campus, and when the trees bloom, its is absolutely gorgeous!! I know that the first one is slightly crooked, but i totally forgot to edit it at school (no software at home cause laptop is down).
     
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    i really like #3 and #6.. good job
     
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    3,4,6 are gracious!!!! so lovely and tender....

    like the taste of nature....fresh, sunny and vulnarable!
    you are a great photographer.
    good job
    p.s. I think 5 needs a little of photoshop)
     

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