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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by KamaKazzy, Oct 11, 2007.

  1. KamaKazzy

    KamaKazzy TPF Noob!

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    Some random black and white shots I've taken.
    My boyfriend, Ethan (he's coming over this weekend so I can try and get some good shots of him)
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    My best friend, Tim (also coming over to get more pics)
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    Tim and Ethan...I need to crop the girl (Dani) out
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    Blurry pic of Ethan, but I thought it looked cool
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    Me...my friend Dani took this one while I 'modeled'
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    Bash away!! C'mon
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well, you asked for it.

    They are too centred. In most of them, the subject is right in the middle, with a bunch of wasted space around them. I think they would be better if you zoomed in or cropped much closer.

    As for the B&W, some of them could use some more contrast.
     
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    Alright, thanks! Now..just gotta figure out how to work photoshop...haha
     
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    Not just that, but the photos don't have anything really special about them. They just look like normal shots. Maybe trying some poses and backrounds. Good Luck!
     
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    Yeah...they were just random shots at school. Most of the people in them are going to come over this weekend and go to the park for some nice pics.
     
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    I would take your subjects outside and try to play around with the composition a bit. I saw your other shots you just posted on another thread, and you are really making progress!!! Get photoshop and play around with the contrast and I bet you will come up with some really neat pics.
     
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    Thanks everyone!!!
     

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