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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by surrrrreal, Jan 20, 2008.

  1. surrrrreal

    surrrrreal TPF Noob!

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    Just a bunch of random shots from the past several weeks.

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    The first one is a little dark, and the fact that you can see the flowers are in a house doesnt do anything for me.
    The second isnt that bad, but that light is a little distracting.
    In the third Im not seeing a real subject, and the shops and telephone poles in the back are a little distracting as well.
    I think the last ones probably the best. But next time try not to center your subject.
     
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    MarcusM TPF Noob!

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    The last shot is the best. In each of the other shots, there are too many distracting elements and the subject is not clear.

    For example, as noob873 stated, in #2, the light post is distracting. It looks as though it's a nature shot of the trees until you see the light post.

    #3 has no clear subject - I'm guessing the subject is the bushes, and they are somewhat interesting, but there's power lines crisscrossing, and buildings in the background - it's too cluttered.

    Keep at it though, you'll start to "see" your subjects better and find the angles to eliminate the clutter with practice.
     
  4. Lorielle99

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    i really like the color of #1. it is a bit dark, but for some reason it works for me.
     
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    surrrrreal TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the comments. :)

    i'll try harder next time to get rid of/avoid the distracting elements in my photos.
     

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