re-edited self portrait (trip to the 50s)

[DeepSpring]

You might remember maybe a week ago I posted this thread http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/showthread.php?t=73876&highlight=trip+50s
I took what was said and tried to lighten my self and add some more detail. I'd like to hear what you have to say about it now.

Edit:I've come to realize already it is not actually "50s" It was mainly just the jacket. I put the name in the title so you would remember from the old post. So if you don't mind critique on the picture and not the title. Thank you

 

[memphis]

has nothing to do with the title, doesn't look like any vintage 50's style photos -- look pixelated and it just doesn't work for me...

 

[silentrunning]

I get a better "feeling" than I did with the original. Like you said- not really '50s, but I think it would make a great album cover for a blues style CD.

 

[DeepSpring]

Thanks for the replies