Reading in the Spotlight

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  1. Alexandra

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    Once again, A pic of my father looking all thoughtful. Any critique, comments, advice???

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  2. Chiller

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    I like the idea, and the feel to this pic. I would maybe crop out the dark side, and somehow dim the light a bit or eliminate it. My eye keeps getting drawn to the bright sopt in the middle and not to the subject.
    Just my opinion...but.... cool shot!!!
     
  3. Alexandra

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    Thanx for the advice, chiller!
    here's version 2! (hey, i'm getting better with photoshop!)
    is it better? ( actually a bit out of focus...)

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    the crop does it for me! I love the mood here! Nice and warm feel too! Great Job Alex! : )
     
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    Very nice Alexandra. Even though it is not 100% sharp, it has a cool effect to it. Nice PS work..I think it looks better.
     
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    I prefer the original, it might be slightly distracting, but at the same time, helps develop the overall scene. Very nice capture. Must have been tough with so little light! Now I am curious as to what he is reading, he looks very absorbed in the material.

    Nice1

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  7. Alexandra

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    thanx ricky!
    I think he was reading some sci-fi...

    And thanks a lot to photo gal and chiller!
     

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