recent portrait session with katherine

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  1. dangerwoman

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    love #2, the light in her face, the clothing. She's very pretty, and you did a good job. I'm not sure I like the house as a background.
    I don't really like the first one. Looks more like you working on your techniques than a picture of Katherine.

    thanks for sharing.




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    She looks like a really pretty model. I prefer the second one, but that bright red house is a little distracting. The hair being in front of her eye bothers me too.
     
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    Yeah, the 2nd one is really good, but something like a treeline would make a better background than that house.
     
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    I'm for the second one as well but with the same reservations as the above mentioned. Perhaps a different crop if you have the room.
    Lightening up her eyes would give it a bit more impact. You did very well with the lighting.
     
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    I really like the first one. Great DOF AND it's something different.
     
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    Love the second shot.
    I even like the house in the background. I think it brings something a little different and almost tells a story.

    I would also like to see a crop of this with her eyes brightened ..

    Nicely done.
     
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    I took the liberty of doing a quick edit on one of your photos. I hope you don't mind :)

    If you want me to take it down, let me know.
     
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    What an absolutely stunning face! I really like the second one, good work.
     

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