Recent Shoot C&C Please

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  1. dostagamom

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    Today I did a shoot of my friend's daughter. Please tell me how I can make these pictures better. I am not sure of the PP. I am particularly wondering about the color...do I need to calibrate my monitor again or is the color "popping" enough. Let me know what you think. Thank you in advance for looking.
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    Sorry here are the pictures
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    Something doesn't seem quite right about the eyes in the first picture. It looks, at least on my computer, like she doesn't have any pupils, like her entire eye is one color. Did you pp the eyes?
     
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    Let me guess. You had the camera on auto focus.
     
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    you need to seriously amp up the saturation levels and contrast
     
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    I was in auto focus...is that a bad thing to do at times?
     
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    I thought so...I will try it. I am not at my home computer so I will do it when I get home.
     
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    I did pp the eyes by brightening them a bit...but her eyes are VERY blue. What can I do to make that better?
     

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