Recent Shoot with noella (C&C welcome)

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  1. SkWeEkiE

    SkWeEkiE TPF Noob!

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    Hey everyone, i haven't been on here in a while but have a few shots that need some good C&C.

    This is my friend from math class, and she's never taken any form of glamour shots or anything of that nature. She was actually very comfortable and easy to pose, and she came up with many poses herself!

    Oh, and the sheet were purchased 5 min. prior to the shoot, so they were all wrinkled, and they are satin so easily reflect the light...

    Please feel free to comment and enjoy!

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  2. oCyrus55

    oCyrus55 TPF Noob!

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    I don't see the pictures.

    Edit: I checked your website. Are the pictures from this thread on there? If so I think I know which ones they are. You have some really nice shots, but some others are just okay.
     
  3. SkWeEkiE

    SkWeEkiE TPF Noob!

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    Fixed...
     
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    were these taken with your kit lense?
     
  5. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice work, I like them.

    One thing to watch...is loosing the hair in the background. #2 is good (did you use a 2nd light?)...but in the others...her hair is completely lost.
     
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    These are all great, but I especially like number 2. Good work!

    But like Mike said, in a couple of them the hair blends with the background. If available, try putting a flash somewhere behind the subject to creat a rimlight to make her hair stand out.
     
  7. SkWeEkiE

    SkWeEkiE TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for viewing and the comments everyone!

    These WERE taken with the Kit lens

    And i know i am in need of a hair light, and should be getting one for Christmas ;)

    Again, Thanks!!
     
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    Hai Skweekie,
    Fine portraits. Yeah, true that she looks relaxed and comfortable. #1 and #2 are very fine, except that her torso should not have been pushed outside. That actually spoiled the glamour of the image. The hair details in the #2 are very fine. Best of luck in your future works.
     
  9. SkWeEkiE

    SkWeEkiE TPF Noob!

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    Thanks very much!! I'll keep practicing!
     
  10. W.Smith

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    The 'ridged bra' is distorting her figure. It puts curved lines where they shouldn't be.
     
  11. ShootHoops

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    I like #1, aside from the awkward pose.
     
  12. DocFrankenstein

    DocFrankenstein Clinically Insane?

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    I love the light. The model is also very comfotrable

    What's the setup you used? Math glamour - LOL
     

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