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Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by Big Mike, Jul 24, 2009.

  1. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    These were shot when I borrowed a friend's battery pack, so that I could use a B800 on location, outdoors.

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  2. HeY iTs ScOTtY

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    clothes with lines and pictures dont mix
     
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    I'm think the window behind the group shot is distracting, and I'm not a fan of the bottom of the baby's shoes. I think bare feet would have looked better.
     
  4. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Thanks for the comments.

    Any others? C&C is welcome and appreciated.
     
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    These are just a bit too centered for me, I would have loved to see you take the kids over to the fountian if mom and dad would let you.
    I would love to see #3 with th tighter crop.
     
  6. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    That's a valid comment.

    I was trying to leave room for an 8x10 crop and I didn't bother to re-crop these files.
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    These are nice, Mike. You combined the strobe with the existing light well.

    The four-generation one is the weakest.... the posing needs work.

    Good job with the clothing.

    The last one is fun! Great expressions on that one.

    -Pete
     
  8. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Thanks Pete, I appreciate the comments. I agree, that one is certainly the weakest because of the posing. I wanted to spend more time with that, but they kept turning back toward me and the little girls was not cooperating at all. I think this was the only one of the 4 gen shots where I actually got her looking in my direction.
     

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