Recent Wedding, Vol. II

ShutteredEye

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Here are a few more from the wedding I shot recently. Comments and critique welcomed.

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I preface this by saying I am on a crappy monitor in my classroom. And I think they are all nice, I am going to nitpick for ya.:wink:

1. The color of the flowers are cool, but she seems to be kinda ghosty with the duotone.

2. Nice conversion, just seems to be a little blown out on the dress.

3. Whats up with the top? is that vignetting?

4. My only complaint on this is the head room.

5. :thumbup:

6. What was you pp on this one. Although I think this is a good one for a little Gaussian Blur, it just seems soft to me. I'm not getting that glowy look.

7. :thumbup:

8. :thumbup:

9. :thumbup:
 
i would disagree on the blown out highlights on the dress, maybe you could fix some of this with less contrast, but i would always say that with people your better off properly exposing skin rather than somthing they are wearing.
 
I like how you've processed the first five.
Like your composition in #3. Just wish she wasn't in the frame. :)
 

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