Recomposition, at the recommendation of others

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  1. iBats

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    well this is a recomp, what do you think
     
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    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    In my opinion...


    ...it's MUCH better than the first.

    Also, glad to see you respond to the comments and post your results.
     
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    thanks a bunch, yeah i had to wait for the snow to clear last night, then got out this morning hopeful that the tree wasn't buried lol
     
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    Is the image slightly desaturated? It works.
     
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    yeah, a bit, but some colors are enhanced, if that makes sense
     
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    bimp, boop, bump
     
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    bump
     
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    I think it looks good. I like how the background is faded out. (Then again I am no expert,so someone else might see something I don't. :p)
     
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    I like the overall idea, it's a nice picture.
    The only thing I do not like about it, is the bright background on the left side, it distracts me a little.
     
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    yeah i though so too, i wast really sure how to fix it, any suggestions?
     
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    Alright! Finally a kid that is listening! Better comp. Not an amazing picture, but your getting there.
     

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