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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by craig, Dec 11, 2006.

  1. craig

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    What are your thoughts on this one? I like it, but it may be slightly abstract. ƒ9 @ 1/80 ISO 400. Focal length = 24 mm on Nikon 17-35. Nikon D200.

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    Nothing wrong with abstract, I like it.

    I would only maybe add a bit more color to your sky (but, thats just my opinion)
     
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    If you had shot the fence at an angle leading into the shot it would have been more effective. I like it but just a thought.
     
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    I hate to say it, but .... have you tried it in mono?
     
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    I like it a lot how it is. But there is still room for improvment, haha, so play around with it a bit? =P How can you get a still shot in teh snow?! I'd be shaking like crazy LOL. I guess that's why they invented tripods? :O
     
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    It is not my favorate that I have seen from you, it seems to be lacking something but don't ask me what cause I have no idea. The horizon seems tilted a bit and maybe a litte too busy for my tastes. Sorry.
     
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    I like it a lot. yes, the sky could do with a bit more color, but that's all.






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  8. craig

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    My sentiments exactly. No need to be sorry I love all crits. I think it is missing light.

    Thanks for looking gang!!!!
     
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    I think maybe you should to try it at a different angle. Its not a bad shot but just needs that little bit extra to grab your attention. I also agree with some of the others, that maybe try to get something more out of the sky.
     

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