Redo the homework -- Commercie Ad (shoes)

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  1. x-man

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    I redo my homework. please comment it again! Thank a lot!

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    i think i like this one better than the other, feels a little dark to me though...
     
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    If the shoes are the product why would you want to cover them up, get some legs inside of them n show em off. H
     
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    This is MUCH better than the previous work!!
    This is homework if I remember right, not a finished product shot that a companies profits depend on.
    So there's room to grow. No need for abso-perfection.

    Putting feet in the shoes would be tricky.

    If you don't use a close to perfect model for the feet, you run the risk of alienating the target demographic.
    If you DO add feet, use a mannequin.
     
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    Thank for your comment, why I am not get some legs inside because I can not found a good leg.
     
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    Thank your comment. I will try more hard work in my photos.
     
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    I feel like there is no focal point. My eyes don't know what to look at.
     

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