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[ntbbc6]

Hey guys,

My school has a literary magazine that publishes short stories and photos. Here are a few that I took recently that I am considering submitting. I only get 2 entries per issue so feedback would be great. These shots are from downtown Kansas City outside of and old factory. Tell me what you think!

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[kanmai]

good one

 

[ntbbc6]

bump...

 

[Mgw189]

number 2 is the best... I think having a story to go along with the shots may help these somewhat.