reflections... critique please

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  1. undergroundquasi

    undergroundquasi TPF Noob!

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    this are a few pictures that i was experimenting with..
    see what you think about them.

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    Very nice conceptually, but seems to have a number of technical issues... missed the focus, sky washed out (may have been unavoidable, but still kind of a shame), the horizon's aren't quite level, colors seem to be a little off.

    Still, conceptually I like it a lot. If the waters haven't receded, I'd say go take another crack at it.
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Agree with completely with Chris. Great on the artistic side, minor issues on the technical side.
     
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    it was a stormy day
    it was raining for two days striaght
    that was a park flooded.
     
  5. undergroundquasi

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    anymore comments
     
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    how about using c-pol for the sky?
     
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    Not bad, I agree with manaheim. You did well though #2 is really good :)
     
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    I like 2, number 1 you see the small black bit in the top left on the edge I found that a little distracting you might want to try and crop/clone that out..
     
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    wooow verey verey nice
     
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    thanks guys for the comments
     

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