Replenishment c&c

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by ericmo, Jun 21, 2008.

  1. ericmo

    ericmo TPF Noob!

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  2. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice idea, and well composed but overall it appears a little soft. I would also suggest cloning out the small piece of dead leaf on the left, and perhaps doing something the the lower half of the background. The green upper part is great, but the contrast is rather stark and hard on the eye.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I don't know how much critique you can take, but if I for once chose to be totally blunt I'd have to say that (despite the good idea and good eye for a very nice motif against an equally nice - and nicely COLOURED ;) - background) this particular photo is a blooper.

    Nothing but ONE leaf is in focus.
    The droplets aren't and most leaves look like there was camera shake. I wonder how that ONE leaf could come into focus, at all.

    Well, now I said it ... and I hope you can take it?
     
  4. ericmo

    ericmo TPF Noob!

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    i can take it! its what drives me to get better at this! after all its what im asking for.
     

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